Obviously, there are stanzas missing from the poem. While I certainly think there’s a rhyme scheme to it, it may not be as simple as AB AB CD CD etc.
From what I can gather reading what we have, this “dirge” is about, basically, a funeral. People have gathered to mourn someone’s passing. Whose passing? I don’t know, but I think that will be revealed once we have more stanzas.
As I’ve been reading, there seems to be a rough chronology to what we already have. But I’ve only been able to put together two stanzas so far. The quotation marks are what I believe makes it work. So, here are the two stanzas I think match up:
declaim’d the Plaint of Nhadastra
“Lo, the stars shine less intently now
in the firmament of glory’s crown.
The lustre of our friend moves on.”
The firmament (sky) is certainly where the stars would shine and the beginning quotation marks from the first stanza need a second pair to end the quote. That second pair of quotation marks are at the end of the second stanza. I’m 90% sure these go together but would love to hear others’ thoughts, especially if they disagree.
As for the other stanzas, I’m not sure which order they go in, but I paired up the ones that I think go together. Either because of the pronouns used or the context within the stanzas.
declaim’d the Plaint of Nhadastra
“Lo, the stars shine less intently now
in the firmament of glory’s crown.
The lustre of our friend moves on.”
The four who stood in mourning voiles
with deep respect their tributes said
A brave sourl released from jewelled eyes
bereft of home, his light soars free.”
sang a stark yet stirring ode
on the hauce his master rode
From the third, a mouse with girlish hair
as her mournful tears clad hallowed air
for she found not the words to mote
So she unfurled her cowl
Ebends unbound Mora’s tether
and Forged the Thorns in drubbin minn’ing
To mark the end of their lament
King Capra rose o’er gathered sways
I think the King Capra line goes toward the end since it sounds like the King is ending the funeral.
Anyway, I’m hoping LT will give us some new verses to add so we can start piecing this together and, hopefully, figuring out how to find the next fragment. I’m really curious to know who they’re all mourning.